Uncle fred

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Smoke came out thick and white of my uncles car as he was driving down our driveway “what's wrong with your car uncle fred i said” he came out with “its just old like me”.

And its tired i shrugged and walked away he always says that the engine has overcooked.

My uncle fred is quite old, and when ever i see him he always wears grey track pants and a grey knitted jersey which stinks of the strong smelling after shave he wears, you can smell it from miles away.

Whenever i see him he is always fixing his hair when the smoke comes out of his car. It is always thick and white and i know to expect a visit from uncle fred.