WALT Edit And Proofread Our Writing First

WALT Edit And Proofread Our Writing First

The good version

At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher, Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow, scaring someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules, the rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

The Bad version

At the start of school dora was afrad of her new teacher mrs davis seamed nice. but she had so manny rules for the class to folow. someone to pieces. as the school year continud dora begun to understand how the teacher come up with the rules. the rules were there so students would be respecful of theyselves and each other. by the end if the year dora thouht mrs. davis was the best teacher she ever had!