Walt Structure a recount

31/07/18

SC i know how to structure my story
I know how to write about a past event

Purpose: Retell a series of events

It was a hot sunny thursday afternoon when I went to the bro jacob
and jared’s house for a swim in there creek. We had our first step
in the mud by the shallow part and sank straight down to the deep
rock hard bottom, and from then on we named it the monstrous nes
quick sand looking mud. So I took off my T-Shirt, and  manu’d in
the deep part by the rocks. Then the bros did to.

About half an hour later we got out and set the hinaki in the
monsterous nes quick sand looking mud that will pull you under
like an undertow in the sea. We were petrified at first to enter the
monstrous nes quick sand looking mud because we might sink
again, so we seeked to find a ginormous wood plank.

As we started investigating we split up, jacob went north, jared
went east and i went south, as i went south i discovered a colossal
wood plank that would fit over the monstrous nes quick sand
looking mud. Once i told the bros we worked as a team to place it,
then all three of us stood in the middle of the wood plank to set
the hinaki, we used a lean meager bit of rope and attached it to
the hinaki, after that we used a thick chunky stick to push the
hinaki down to the bottom and we left it for the next day to check.

READ CHAPTER two to find out what
we caught